Kia Ora Tatiana, my names Toby. I love how you've described all the key parts in the story of Jack & The Beanstalk and even looking at your writing I can tell you'll grow to be even more skilled than you are now,also I can picture exactly everything that happens in the story when I read your little description. I especially love the detail you've put into your picture, it's far better than the ones I used to draw. Could you next time explain what happens after he climbs the beansttalk and if Jack escapes the ferocious giant(s)? Keep It Up!
Kia Ora Tatiana, my names Toby.
ReplyDeleteI love how you've described all the key parts in the story of Jack & The Beanstalk and even looking at your writing I can tell you'll grow to be even more skilled than you are now,also I can picture exactly everything that happens in the story when I read your little description. I especially love the detail you've put into your picture, it's far better than the ones I used to draw. Could you next time explain what happens after he climbs the beansttalk and if Jack escapes the ferocious giant(s)?
Keep It Up!
Kind Regards,
Toby